Yazia_Author
For a number of chapters the flow seems off… the details change or are missing. This last party used the same paragraph and the previous party except in both, nothing was said when the party happened. Her parents were surprised she got back together with her husband? What did Hayden say this time? Damien and Arabella’s behaviors keep changing too fast, I feel like I still don’t know the characters. The only thing really consistent is Damien’s anger.