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Comments of chapter undefined of I Have Infinite Systems In The Immortal World

Apollocus
ApollocusLv13Apollocus

It’s pretty good but execution needs work there are a lot of plot holes you should keep naming of skills consistent and explain what techniques give to the user because I see the mc sometimes using something like shadow dragon steps one times and is never used again or something like plum blossom wind slash which comes from his fan also either was never used again or had it’s name changed. You should also keeps notes to yourself on what you’re giving the mc so you can check later so you can use items he has and so you can remember. There is also some plot holes but currently they are whatever but if they stack they will break the story.

Beatriche
BeatricheLv2Beatriche

oobess
oobessLv4oobess

Thanks for the chapter. I am very interested in what his next system will be.

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DaoistMT7ktp
DaoistMT7ktpLv3DaoistMT7ktp

the book was interesting keep on[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

AstaUzumaki
AstaUzumakiLv13AstaUzumaki

It's like this entire sect has been created just to become MC's personal harem :)

Reaper_Souls
Reaper_SoulsLv5Reaper_Souls

Thanks for the chapter!

Pushpam_Katiyar_2131
Pushpam_Katiyar_2131Lv4Pushpam_Katiyar_2131

you seriously are way to smart you know what the public wants good job 👍

PikaAndrew
PikaAndrewLv4PikaAndrew

yayayay