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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Family System

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Naruto: Family System

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Taimur_Ali
Taimur_AliLv4Taimur_Ali

so you wrote one scene that could have been 2 paragraph and made it a chapter. but i like the idea and you have good grammar so i will stick around. maybe wait fpr you to write 10 chapters and then read them. that should be like a chapter at this rate.

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SoftCrow
SoftCrowAuthorSoftCrow

nah 9

iLuBu3000:nah 6
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Aaron_Vittore
Aaron_VittoreLv4Aaron_Vittore

can something happen already?

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SAM_NZ_1127
SAM_NZ_1127Lv5SAM_NZ_1127

author don't you feel like you are streching the story a bit too much now.

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Antonio_Araneda
Antonio_AranedaLv10Antonio_Araneda

Bueno pero termina aburriendo un capĂ­tulo se transforma en 5

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Zero93
Zero93Lv6Zero93

Thanks for chapter

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Eleesar_Talcontar
Eleesar_TalcontarLv1Eleesar_Talcontar

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SirJuan_Juan
SirJuan_JuanLv14SirJuan_Juan

Good Chapter 👍

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grandis
grandisLv13grandis

good girl yaneko

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Mathias_Irusta
Mathias_IrustaLv3Mathias_Irusta

Gracias por el capítulo 😁

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Eternal_Paradox
Eternal_ParadoxLv4Eternal_Paradox

will there be a double or single release tomorrow ?

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