Comments of chapter undefined of Lost in Sothoryos | A Game of Thrones fanfic

Honestly, Jon shouldn't have had so much trouble taking down King Robert, besides Robert barely getting back in shape after more than fourteen years of lack of physical activity and training, Robert also had to first lose weight to start gaining muscle. and he's been fighting for longer, I think this fight should have ended by now and to give Robb some space you made a mistake, the dialogue between Ashara and Jon also needs work it's ridiculous for him to say he's going to die because it's his fault besides him having children and that doesn't solve anything, if he knows just a little about Robert's personality, he would know that neither his children nor his wives would escape Robert's fury, they would probably be raped by Robert and the soldiers as a form of revenge and to humiliate the Targaryens.