Comments of chapter undefined of Lost in Sothoryos | A Game of Thrones fanfic
Lost in Sothoryos | A Game of Thrones fanfic
TheManUnderTheBed
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Honestly, Jon shouldn't have had so much trouble taking down King Robert, besides Robert barely getting back in shape after more than fourteen years of lack of physical activity and training, Robert also had to first lose weight to start gaining muscle. and he's been fighting for longer, I think this fight should have ended by now and to give Robb some space you made a mistake, the dialogue between Ashara and Jon also needs work it's ridiculous for him to say he's going to die because it's his fault besides him having children and that doesn't solve anything, if he knows just a little about Robert's personality, he would know that neither his children nor his wives would escape Robert's fury, they would probably be raped by Robert and the soldiers as a form of revenge and to humiliate the Targaryens.
Dude, 6 to 7 months is not even close to enough for someone who lived completely overweight for 14 years, he would need to lose all the fat to start gaining muscle other than through weight training exercises at that time to accelerate weight loss, honestly it's impossible for him being able to fight the way shown in this chapter he wouldn't have as much resistance, speed and strength, and on top of that he fought using two hammers in this chapter which would make him tire even faster, I know you don't want to leave Jon Op but there's no point in doing that if you're going to boost his enemies, the battle itself was good but Robert's discrepancy ruined the chapter for me
TheManUnderTheBed:Robert has had nearly 6-7 months to get back into shape and that’s what he’s been doing, he isn’t that old so it’s not difficult for him to do. His children and wives have all sailed to safety that is why he sent them away in the first place, because he knew what Robert was like.
