Comments of chapter undefined of Keystone, an Awesome Parallel Plane Adventure

Really loving your story though my dudes crisis exasperated me a lot. I'm still enjoying everything about it though. I'm glad and intrigued that Cairn cracked and I'm curious if he will leave his mentality from earth behind. I'm also really loving his relationship with Kaia and hope they eventually at some point in the future become lovers officially. I can't wait to see more of Cairn's adventure.