Littlecarrot
. . . I enjoyed the plot and while the grammar did have issues it didn't really take away from the story. I would love if the story continued as I want to follow the characters as they continue on their cultivation journey; but, I understand if you didn't choose to come back to this hidden gem. In short: Author I enjoy the story please write more if you want.
Many sad feelings. I have enjoyed this book, it has some of the same ( parts, tone) as your other two books. white hair/ red eyes.. brother obsession...male leads ...dark possesive... sweet female ...too many to name but it all adds up to two of my favorites in my library. I hope you, Little Carrot , can come back to this and give it new life.