Comments of chapter undefined of Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)

Vaifu kiss shot

since rias's is desperate to get out of marriage. make a contract with her in which she will make him devil in exchange for fighting for her and getting him out of marriage in exchange by getting in contact with his brother since he dotes her and he cannot make a move himself because of great king faction. A winning situation. Mc gets freadom and a free race change and power up while she gets freed out of marriage and a little help.

Wiz

I like how you intentionally miss spelled kiba's name to express the ma's mentality towards him. very subtle yet amusing.

Honest. I would join Rias. She just needs guidance to stop being a spoiled princess.

Good chapter Zombina monster musume

All of you in the comment section need to calm down and stop being a beta, being in Rais peerages isn’t all that bad if any of you have read or seen the original anime other than reading some nonsense fanfics where they make it seem like slavery. Being in Germory’s or any rasional devil’s peerages doesn’t mean anything like that rather it’s more like being in a family so get off your high horse.

Why do you often mistype names and fortunately this is just a fanfic with mostly familiar character names I can't imagine if that happened in the original novel if I wrote the name wrong -_-

My only problem is that it needs some proofreading before release, in my opinion. The mistakes are small and easily fixed. Good chapter tho.

Bro, do not join any peerage. It is better to be blessed by a god or exile as a human

The names do be funny

Este capítulo se puede describir como basura, el hecho de que no durará nisiquiera 2 días guardando sus secretos acerca de lo sobrenatural deja mucho que desear, además ¿que es esa estupidez acerca que no puede subir su control de energía maldita atraves de entrenamiento? ¿Qué clase de sistema gamer pirata eh inútil es este?? Es absurdo no poder subir de nievel ciertas habilidades a través de entrenamiento.

Kiba, Kaiba, Kubo, Kina, Kayaba... What next?

Algunas parte esta mal escrita los nombres

Gracias por el capítulo

Thanks

Puedes escribir los nombres y apellidos bien y sin fallos son muy fáciles