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Comments of chapter undefined of The Lost Fairy (Seven Deadly Sins fanfiction)

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uN_Joohn
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Hmm... your story is kind of rushed. I know you're wanting to shorten the reunion of sins because everyone knows the beginning, but could you detail some situations a little more and not make a chapter just of dialogues.

Krishna_Mittal
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that is a good point and i kinda agree maybe I will put it on hold and do a rewrite

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Krishna_Mittal
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that is a good point and i kinda agree maybe I will put it on hold and do a rewrite