UltimateSenpai
The story doesn't need OP companions that are stronger than the MC specially in a wish fulfillment story like this. And what does Rimuru and Veldora bring into the story? nothing but a nuclear deterrent to the MC's enemies which he should be fighting himself if he wants to. We are interested in the MC's is improving his Manga business and fighting skills. We don't want this Overpowered characters stealing spotlight from the MC
I like your story dude, but I can see where people are annoyed too. People like Rimuru and Veldora are just adding unnecessary layers to the fic. This story was at its best when it was merging different concepts well, like how Jujutsu was being used along with Adeptal Techniques under Zhongli. It was a nice mixture. With Rimuru and Veldora, it feels more bloated. Maybe in future chapters it will be better, but that is what I've noticed. But at the end of the day, you are the author. Write what you think is your best story. All the best dude.
I came here for manga in teyvat not trash summoning. I want to see the mc grow overpowered but now it’s doesnt matter as he has overpowered companions that make his whole powering up meaningless. Some strong antagonists shows up he just throws the summon at it. Mc is just useless now if his summons can do everything he can and more
First, let me apologize if my words offended you, the author. and as for the idea of spreading anime on teyvat, if what you need is someone who can build a computer and set up a network that can connect to all countries, you don't even need to call Veldora or Rimuru, I mean... there are robots in Teyvat, also Sumeru already has a network in the form of Akasha, and don't forget that in Fountain there are mechanical fish to organize and survey the environment that we can catch with a fishing rod, so if you don't see the presence of computers in Teyvat, it doesn't mean that they don't exist, they are just waiting to be discovered by you . (Google Translate)
i don't know man ifrit and pi makes sense but other two doesn't. They are too powerful man. You could have just made that race(that one which enters car phone alike and upgrade plus control them) the grey things made in ben 10. By themself they are not that powerfully too they need technology to work but mc can buy some computer and such already. They are super versitale too but you just summoned rimuru. I'm not super versitale in genshin(like almost none) but what's left there that can threaten our mc with those guys and his power(again don't mind the butchering)
is this dropped ? if it is then there goes another good novel i sometimes do not get ppl that come here and complain about the story so what if the author adds whatever character he/she wants to his story its his/hers u have no right to complain the only time u can complain is when the translation level is trash don't bother leaving ur reviews if you are bothered by the change is story no 1 wants it and certainly not the author (thx for pushing some 1 to drop a story) while u sit and twiddle ur baby thumbs on ur keyboard thinking you are actually worth something.
seriously, giving mc summoning abilities??, from the beginning it was easy for you to give mc a bunch of op abilities, i saw how mc abused his power and how trash he was, he thinks his own strength is enough and isn't cautious at all, and he doesn't respect others either, he's an adult, not a child, mc isn't even well developed Obviously, the mc's goals, will, and beliefs are not expressed. From the beginning, the series was extremely wrong in creating a stable mc, and then also provided him with a bunch of op, fanfic skills. is following the path of Chinese fanfic, in short, it's bad, very bad, if not trash, please end it and create a new beginning