Comments of chapter undefined of Ace combat In Multiverse?!
Ace combat In Multiverse?!
Souleye123
Chapter comments28
Ok, I really like the beginning and the way you wrote the whole battle, but when it ended I was just disappointed and just skimmed through the rest of the chapters. For me it was unnecessary and completely killed the pleasure of reading. I thought the MC just came in and out of the world, which probably made me dislike this arc. The way he was treated and these interactions with others irritated me a bit and showed me what the rest of the story would look like, which confirmed my belief that it wasn't for me. Anyway, I definitely wrote too much and I have go to sleep because in 7 hours I have to wake up for work. good luck with the story
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Souleye123
so he stayed in a world he hardly knows the culture of simply because he doesn't want is sister to see a scar? if that's wrong then im sorry but that's what I got from this, he stays in a world he hardly knows with people he can't really trust... in my opinion that sounds a lot more dangerous than your sister crying about you being hurt. I know he doesn't die because it's his story but still.
