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Comments of chapter undefined of QT: These Twins Will Make Their Own Decisions [BL]

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DrZee
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It’s nice but the story feels like a summary to me

Nonchalant_ABCDEFG
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I was thinking the same. I’m gonna spend more time on volume 2 to make more dialogues and POV’s. It’s my first time writing so I put exactly what was in my head in the story without adjustments. 🥲