God_Doom
Bruh, a little forced, I didn't find the logic that the mc saw in his decision, he was under the influence of a drug that makes him much more intelligent and still made this decision, I don't think the fact of losing emotion makes the for a person to take a risk like this that involves his own life so easily, even more so with the effect of the drug, I didn't understand his decision because he is accepting to receive the memory of another living being with 30 times his age and experience in a way that he has no idea how it works, in my opinion receiving this memory doesn't help the mc especially since Ra's Al Ghul is clearly corrupted by the well and his explanation makes even less sense, did he do research? Just that? Then he knows that he can become immortal with just Bruce's soul, how? And if he only needs two people, why didn't he just grab anyone off the street and become immortal before, why does it have to be the MC? This combined with the other problem makes the chapter quite forced, but ok.
MC really tried to overcome Ra's al Ghul with his Willpower? Is he really too proud (I understand if he had a Batman-level Will, but he doesn't)? I wouldn’t be surprised if during the Battle a piano flew out of the bushes to MC in the form of a Lantern Ring: I think the Ring of Hope suits him best (he has little Willpower, Anger will only harm him, and Fear, although suitable for Batman, but MC not a Villain) 🤔
The truth is that this seems like garbage to me, Ras should not even be able to be even 50 percent of making the MC use his strength, he surpasses him in everything and yet he is losing?? The serum garbage is for nothing then 🤷 so much 60 tons of force plus all the speed of physics and reaction due to the serum are of no use and that is without counting all the increase that the chi makes if in total he is going to lose by script. ...