Comments of chapter undefined of HOTD: The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale

I personally feel like the choice that the Mc childrens taming wild dragon is better than having a weak young one by the time the dance occurred.

Another kid? I thought MC wanted Laena to stay alive and be his life partner? He's really taking a big risk here, especially since she's the rider of Vhagar and Aemond still hasn't claimed a dragon of his own. Does MC remember that in the original story, she died giving birth? And on top of that, in the original story she wasn't a teenager either (in this fanfiction she's pregnant at 16 and 18... in the original, she got pregnant at 23 and 26) and had more time between pregnancies to recover... Clement should seriously prioritize Laena's life to avoid her tragic fate from the canon. He already has the necessary heir and a spare heir... so why would he even take such a risk?

very very interesting...I see positives for house Targaryen if they give the celtigars an egg...yes this generation will have the dragon but that dragon could be ridden by other Targaryens after their celtigar riders death ...more dragons in the world is what the other houses of westeros are trying to avoid, thereby weakening House Targaryen and I hope viserys understands this soon....somehow....

oh possible green fic, since laenor is still single, or it will be something else who knows, since for sure vhagar will stay with mc, since laena wont be dying via child birth soon

first of all live the chapter babes but Personally the idea of the twins having eggs makes no sense as they are older and it would be seen as political suicide as the celtigars don’ have recent Targaryen blood and if the eggs hatched it would shake belief in the targaryens as it’ believed only those with Targaryen blood have a chance at hatching eggs so I suggest they tame wild dragons like grey ghost/ sheep stealer or make it spicy and the claim silverwing/Vermithor

I hope that Rhaenyra doesn’t seek out and later tries to seduce Clement into being the biological donor of her kids. Because that may happen when she’s finally married Laenor in this story. He wouldn’t consider forsaking his any of marriage vows to his waifu who is the rider of the largest living dragon in the realm unless Laena permits him to do it in the highly likely event that her gay bro and Rhaenyra asks. That is only if Rhaenyra will be marrying Laenor(just as she did in canon) in this fic.

personally, I would prefer him to design a special ship and outfit to avoid grayscale disease and explore the ruins of valyria, as far as I know, Targaryen was just a lowly family, he can bring larger dragon eggs and valyrian steel

the dialogues between clement and viserys was really bad... you repeat the same lines for 4-5 paragraphs with no Reason

Let get to 1000 power stones

Thanks for chapter

Any news on the next chapter

thanks for the chapter.

More!!!

preciate the chapter .

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Great chapter

Well done 👏👏👏 here is the stone as promised