Comments of chapter undefined of [HP X DXD] Master of a Universe

If you are not gonna involve Issei then please don't kill him and just make him irrelevant. If you have read the DxD novel, you should know how hard it was for Issei's parents to have him.

Thanks for the chapter

thanks again for another wonderful and exciting chapter

Thanks for the chapter on a good story.

Why always rias

I guess issei is out of the picture.

This is why you shouldn't plagiarize. The writing went from great quality to a subpar middle school quality.

Not but but you should use more contractions during dialogue

Author, will he stay on rias’ pearage for ever or will he gain his freedom?

no world needs an idiot v-iiirgiin b-ooobs yelling MC . already this is many times better than canon DxD 😁

I'm actually happy with this, I don't think I've ever seen a good fic where the main character becomes a peerage member. let's hope it's good

Thx 4 the Chapter~!👌

Мне блевать хочется, чтобы не случилось но постоянно превращается в демон. Вам нахуй самим не надоело это дерьмо?

Interesting