What are you planning to do with the clones? Are they gonna get intimate with the women? If so, please reply, because I would rather not read about that. Otherwise, great fic!
should the clones get involved in intimate situations he'll effectively be NTRing himself in a way. and I'm not interested in reading that.hopefully they'll only be used for training, business, and mundane fighting tasks
Please inform us now if the clones are going to be intimate with women. I would rather leave the story with fond memories as a discontinued story, than with annoying memories of a great fic being ruined.
Great chapter, with so many interactions between Naruto and Tsunami, I really wish he would take her to Konoha, she is a widow and alone, I also expect an interaction with Haku, maybe Zabuza asking him to take her, to expose her to war.