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Comments of chapter undefined of Lord Raven's Court

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Alexander_27
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how could a commander openly insult a general in the army, if this was realistic she would have been whipped for insubdination

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Luthaniour
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I’ll come back and read these 2 chapters once I understand the story first. A large dump of, what may be information necessary for the story to make sense, before the story even starts and if in the lack of knowing it makes the story hard to follow, ruins the story then I can only say that taking the time to show off your writting finesse and world building is wasted here and not in the story itself. Will come back!

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Alexander_27
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it does thanks, it still feels weird for it to be done so openly.