Comments of chapter undefined of Strongest Unconventional Necromancer
Strongest Unconventional Necromancer
Kiwidraken
Chapter comments5
Thank you for the feedback. It means a lot that you're willing to write so much for me :P EC and TM are kind of also my favorites, but EC is what it is and I've put a lot of time into making TM what it is right now, so I don't think I can do it consistently and frequently without it losing quality. And for SUN, I think I've made Ritzy's goals pretty clear. He wants to become the greatest necromancer by surpassing his inspiration, The Dark One, which no one knows much about, really. He also wants to figure out what's wrong with his magic, even if it takes beating up a god to do so. I'm pretty sure he had a conversation with Gerhart about that. And I have an ending with that explanation in mind. I would say that the plot is currently being built to lay a foundation for Ritzy's journey, but it might be a little plotless at the moment. Not for long tho >:)
m_P3rch:You took a well deserved break. With the amount you’ve written till now, it was a wonder you were still alive. About the feedback… well, it is a nice novel. Although Triangle Mage and Elemental Cats are the ones I like the most, this one is solid. I like the way it is written. You seem to no longer be fixed on details and leave some suspense for us instead of writing info dumps ( which is well appreciated). Characters are nice. You managed to explain their relations mostly by the way they talk and what they do to help each other rather that just writing out their backstory, which is very good. I am still wondering if you have the ending of the novel in your head, because till now it looks like we will just be observing Ritzy‘s jorney to the strongest (also not bad, but it would be nice to have some peaks into the end goal, since it is already chapter 50 and we still pretty much know nothing about main goals). can not say much about the pacing, since I don’t know the scale you are planning for this novel, but keep in mind that if you are planning for it to be 500 chapters novel, 10% of the plot should be already done by this chapter. And remember that 1 chapter a day is also a good frequency. Don’t focus on quantity, but quality