Comments of chapter undefined of One piece: Far past

it look fine, not bad i will say, but you can improve, if you can make dialogue more fluid, like you want to write complex dialoque between the people, but the problem is you are using simple words and verbes, repeating the names of people alot, and that apears very confusing to the reader. im not english native speaker but even i get confused in the fight scene.

Thanks for the chapter, amazing how it showed the fight. " One step, one cut arm two steps;Two steps a liver punch, three steps another wounded arm; fourth step a broken jaw..." LIKED. Questions: Will there be a Harem? Hopefully not; Will the mc have a fruit?