Fluffypie
I dont know why, but the longer I read this novel, the more I dislike the MC. I was kinda rooting for him in the beginning, but now i just feel like he is becoming an inhumane Zerg, which means the system is controlling him, not the other way around. I dont like MCs that are weak minded.
No offense but what kind of humanity are you expecting him to hold on with this kind of power? Logically he’s gonna become more inhumane just based on his powers if he were to retain a majority of his humanity he wouldn’t maximize its potential. As for the system there’s always gonna be a price for power, systems are generally to op, the consequences of using them should be obvious, their gonna push you to utilize them more in their area of expertise or change you. Power is not free their always add ons attached
....asking for the thunder god is stupid in my opinion. You can just master the substitution juts and then use your bugs to switch places on the battle field. There is a reason why kishimoto loved to use it so much in the original, but then in shippuden he made people forget about it. Because with substitution you can pretty easily Dodge op attacks like amateratsu whole the enemy has wasted so much chakra just to miss the target.......besides thunder god is a fuinjutsu on the highest level. Not even sealmasters like jiraya, hiruzen and orochimaru were able to learn it. How exactlly does shino plan on learning it, if he hasn't even learned basic fuinjutsu? A lot better option would have been if shino asked about the shadow clone. That way he could have used it to boost his training, and with alina he could have shared vision with the clones just like how pain does it with his paths.
Author, I understand that sometimes readers make comments and bad reviews that end up unmotivated, but seriously, do you really think that interrupting the MC every time is something truly Good? Like seriously it's just frustrating, like it literally just skips from chapter 15 to this one, such a good theme but so misused because your MC is interrupted all the time that's sad. Well good luck with your story author but for me it really bothered me like no other FF has done before, and I've already gone deep into this rabbit hole called fanfics.
instead of going big with flying thunder god how about basic fuinjustu taught by Jiriya. other FF I've read has broken fuinjutsu as an equation that has many ways to answer it, in theory you could use Alina to construct the seals then use another mutated bug to place seals wherever you want. maybe even rewrite a certain organizations seal in the shadows?