Comments of chapter undefined of Dungeon Master : Tale of a Monster

I love the story so, you might need an editor as there is a sentence though i understand intent doesn't make sense like where should be cities it says city or reverse, like mother of dungeon feels like it should be mother of dungeons worth an S at the end, minor things though I do believe it help with quality of story. any Way loving it so far keep it up

Thanks for the Chapter!

Tyftc