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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry potter: The ringmaker

ChickenNugget
ChickenNuggetLv12ChickenNugget

Doing rituals during puberty, while he's turning into a elf, seems stupid to me. At the very least he should wait a year for his tranformation to be over before doing it.

Ekmah
EkmahLv14Ekmah

would have thought that Celebrimbor wouldn't be affected by confondus and able to tell our MC during sleep that dumbles stole his blood.After all Celebrimbor was shown multiple time in the story to be able to see the MC's actions...

Taragorm
TaragormLv1Taragorm

Honestly this ritual section is killing immersion for me dont get me wrong loving the fanfic but i can get over the knowledge that he can make rings that would do what the rituals can and that the reflex one and eyesight one is redundant with having elvan traits coming to him it just doesnt make sense to me am i missing something

Klynt_The_Frog
Klynt_The_FrogLv4Klynt_The_Frog

Thanks for the chapter :) I can't imagine a dragons lung being an ingrediant in Fire wiskey, there's too few dragons for it to be a viable ingredient option for such a famous drink.

Reistlan
ReistlanLv3Reistlan

I'm forgot about mc blood already. Too many useless information.

lector_enfermo
lector_enfermoLv1lector_enfermo

Gracias por el cap. En mi opinión no me repudia totalmente el tema de los rituales pero entiendo el punto de vista de lo que no le gusta la idea y siento que tienen cierta razón. Los argumentos con los que coincido son que el se va a transformar en un elfo y no necesita urgentemente esos rituales de mejora y segundo que podría tener los mismos efectos con anillos. ¿Mejorar reflejos? Un anillo que prevea unos segundos el peligro o un anillo que acelere los impulsos nerviosos. ¿Visión nocturna? Un anillo que modifique sus ojos para que sean como los de un felino y así se puede me explicando diferentes mejoras. También entiendo que quizás no quieres que los anillos sean muy OP pero podrías poner dificultades como elementos necesarios ¿Quieres un anillo para visión nocturna? Entonces necesitas ojos de algún animal mágico que vea bien en la oscuridad y así se puede colocar barreras para que el mc no sea muy OP

TiagoRits
TiagoRitsLv10TiagoRits

O MC não está mudando para um elfo? Então não entendo porque os rituais. Um elfo sempre possui sentidos, físico, visão e destreza maior que os humanos normalmente. Então focar em rituais está deixando a história redundante...

Jayson_Ultrix
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PrimalWhiteStar
PrimalWhiteStarLv4PrimalWhiteStar

Thanks for the New Chapter 🤩 the rituals are good... maybe after he stopped transforming...

AvidReader962
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klostrez
klostrezLv14klostrez

thanks for the chapter

Yamakasi_10
Yamakasi_10Lv4Yamakasi_10

Thanks for the hard work

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

Alenzure
AlenzureLv13Alenzure

Thanks for chaps

dylan_edwards
dylan_edwardsLv14dylan_edwards

what happened to Lockhart?

mertlafy
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jasss22
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Thanks for the chapter.

Jin_Kazaragi
Jin_KazaragiLv4Jin_Kazaragi

Merci pour le chapitre !

silverbeardeddwarf
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Thanks for the chapter

Ethan132
Ethan132Lv14Ethan132

Ty :)