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Comments of chapter undefined of Apocalypse Chaos - I am the villain

timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1timeawayfromstress

forcibly adding a character to the novel. will people evolve or become stronger in the apocalypse? Will the other person become a burden to mc? Will there be a risk of betrayal? Let mc find a way to steal the other side's ability. If you're going to write evil mc, write real evil mc.

timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1timeawayfromstress

what's the problem ? sentences may be illogical due to translation.

Reminiscing:Do you even read this chapter before commenting?
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14Kw0z

Looks like you added a little plot hole. It said earlier that as long as a girl was beautiful and a vrgn, the MC would have her in his harem, but Shiori—although she may become beautiful later—isn’t a vrgn.

Feldman
FeldmanLv4Feldman

Got dark, but well written. Keep up the good work!

timeawayfromstress
timeawayfromstressLv1timeawayfromstress

Thanks for chapter

Davil_Angle
Davil_AngleLv3Davil_Angle

thanks for chapter

Samu29
Samu29Lv2Samu29

it may seem bad but I don't want shiori to be part of the harem

kjxudvc
kjxudvcLv13kjxudvc

❤❤