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Comments of chapter undefined of I BECOME PROTAGONIST FATHER?

Kayden_Duhaney
Kayden_DuhaneyLv15Kayden_Duhaney

As a bisexual I say yes to yuri your the author you should write the story the way you want it otherwise because other people stories and not yours

Kayden_Duhaney
Kayden_DuhaneyLv15Kayden_Duhaney

Because honestly if they aren’t paying your bills why are you changing your story to fit their wants and needs. Maybe they should write their own damn story. Just tag yuri in and put explanation in the synopsis that some of the sex scenes will include Yuri and if they have a problem with it pick another story to read. It’s your story you’re the author is your idea to create the story is your idea to write down the scenes within the story pertaining to the subject of the MC you’re the one who came up with the idea of the story like they didn’t participate in this at all if it’s a critique on how you’re writing something because it’s harder to read then that’s fine but on how you’re creating your story and what’s going on with the new story is a bit much because some people have great plans on stories but don’t know how to execute them then they re-somebody else’s story and I see how it’s like basically the same idea and then want to tell you how to truly do it just to make you change it into what they want it to be that is not your own story is theirs sorry if this is hard to read I’m using the voice thingy on my phone

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uWu_69
uWu_69Lv4uWu_69

add yuri tag u idiot

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Nontr
NontrLv12Nontr

THX for the chapter

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electric_pun2005
electric_pun2005Lv14electric_pun2005

thx for chapter

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BFive
BFiveLv4BFive

hm.. good, but can you use capital letters only at the beginning of sentences?