Comments of chapter undefined of Starting The Group Chat With Solo Players
Starting The Group Chat With Solo Players
Door_kun
Chapter comments17
The little sister part is especially disgusting since even though the mc is always thinking about her safety. He was literally thinking about her in the last chap and is worried to go to mission cause she's not really safe even though there is the guild. Going from that scene to now makes me think that the little sister don't really deserve to be part of the group chat and all the care that the mc has given her. I know you're just going to make a PoV of her accepting powers from so that she can help her brother more, but that will just be superficial and cliche since I know that it's just an excuse.
I agree with Useless_g. This 'comedy' is not really funny especially with how the sister easily "betrayed" him even with all the things hed done for her. This chap made me not like the little sister( even if you made a PoV of her the damage is done).I don't know why you find this funny comedy, but the chapter really made frustrated. Not gonna lie my frustrations made me think of the scenario that the mc, due to frustration, didn't enter and let D get the spot to see how the other members suffer due to their actions. I think highly of you because this is a very good fic. This chap is not really for me and i think it's still good, but not for me. I don't say that i don't like your work but with how his little sister betrayed him is not just something I like. Good chap. I hope to see the next chapter!
Written in the Translator, unfortunately. I'm too lazy to fix the possible writing errors. I won't complain about the extra Administrator, but about this kind of 'comedy'. It is extremely stressful to see this type of Comedy, especially if you connect some simpler factors. First. Administrator D forcedly entered the chat and now the MC will have to compete for his spot to be able to go on missions. As much as this can be a good thing (if used to develop the Protagonist in his main world), it is still extremely annoying the way Administrator D is acting. Second. This comedy where his Sister votes Administrator D through some bribery and tries to make it all happy is disgusting to say the least. They are family and he has done a lot for her so far (adding her in chat, helping her and other things 'outside the narration', where they grew up together), this kind of thing is a literal betrayal (not romantic, but yes familiar) and this is something disgusting. Third. In all the stories that 'D' was added, they always deified the character a lot. I'm not saying she's not a good character or anything, I'm just saying that it's not hard to come up with a System or Chat that will put her within bounds, to keep her readers from getting stressed out. Honestly, it was quite fun. But now with the way things are going, the fun is turning to dread. I know it's too early to judge considering this happened in this chapter, but something similar has happened before (when D entered for the first time). I can imagine several scenarios and in all of them, I don't see a way that the Protagonist will be able to get around this without spoiling the Work. Anyway, even with all these complaints: it was a good Chapter.
