Comments of chapter undefined of Chalice Of Blood

Alright. I found this chapter a little lacking. The element of surprise is there at the end, but the tension that was supposed to be there as he was searching for the meaning of his life was a little lacking. Could have done a better job there. And the anger that he had expressed that he was helpless could have been done in a much better manner. The emotion was shown very slightly, whilst helplessness and anger should have been stressed more there. A good read. Keep it up!