Comments of chapter undefined of The Devil's Warrior Queen

I honestly love your writing and story line, it's just Captivating 🤗Although I do have one problem, I think you spend too much time describing the moment or person that it eventually becomes tiring or even boring.A few words of how they look or are dressed or maybe the power their presence commands should be enough!we are more interested in the detailed conversation or action taking place.Anyways I love your work and I wish you all the best 🤍