Ilovefictions
just suggest don't make him to train rasengan until Jiraiya teach it to him. It'll be suspicious if he can do that. so, the first thing that he need to learn is chakra control and nature transformation. Also it'll be good if he has adamantine chains, how about make it like Kurapika's [Hunter x Hunter]
Good chapter I will write a couple of suggestions : - Why don't you make the mc look and put menmas clothes ? - Why instead of rasengan do the menma technique ( the black rasenfan and rasenshuriken? - Why not unlock uzumakis kekkei genkais( adamntine chains , kaguya eye and fuinjitsu talent level max)? - Go to your father in law for money and then you the largest clan backing you , if you convince them - Can you include games arc as well in this Ff? - Why not plunder minato's bodie to get the other half of kurama?