GloriousMilfHunter
This is taking soo long man, one ark took nearly 50 chapter and everything happened in only a few hours, you moving too fast in the story I understand you don't want to stick with cannon but at least give the characters some space remember that a hundred years is just like a few months to them, take is slow and let him and his girls to have some time even if it was off screen like a time skip, his enemy is a genius manipulative man who takes things slow, do the same and let Mc cook some plans not rush to fights just because he was cornered..... pretty sure no one will read this and I'm just talking to myself.