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Becoming A Global Superstar With System

Vishwajeet_Bhutada

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ZhourongHephaestus
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author have some structural problems in your chapters and the emotions felt bit bland, do work on that. thanks for the effort

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Vishwajeet_Bhutada
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Okay it's my first novel I am working on it I shall try to improve. Thanks for suggestion

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Sujeet_Bidwe
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Thanks for the chapter

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Aditya_Padhiyar
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Good ....

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