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Comments of chapter undefined of The Primordial Record

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The Primordial Record

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Mr_Babbles
Mr_BabblesLv15Mr_Babbles

this chapter was garbage, so many grammatical mistakes, did you let a monkey with a typewriter write this? Ive noticed that the further i read, the worse the grammar becomes

8mth
Omni_King
Omni_KingLv13Omni_King

The only ones I saw happened when common folk were talking. I’m starting to think that’s an accent.

7mth
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Rayray12r
Rayray12rLv1Rayray12r

cool

3mth
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Rayray12r
Rayray12rLv1Rayray12r

work on the grammar but the book is great

3mth
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Rayray12r
Rayray12rLv1Rayray12r

Nice book

3mth
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BStar
BStarLv3BStar

Thanks for the Chapter!

8mth
TheAncientOnell
TheAncientOnellLv5TheAncientOnell

what's with the side characters, its nerving readers to many foreboding ND foreshadowing without proper info sucks

1yr
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