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Comments of chapter undefined of The Primordial Record

Sonofchicken3
Sonofchicken3Lv13Sonofchicken3

is it just me, or is this annoying to read? Every paragraph is overfilled with descriptions and not giving the readers imagination a chance. So far I'm just a little unimpressed, however I'll read on and see..

CosmicFloppa
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geat chapter BRICKTRADER, thank you for such a languistic delicacy of a chapter

Lucinda_Hacker
Lucinda_HackerLv4Lucinda_Hacker

Awesome was looking forward to reading that Twilight one

Lucinda_Hacker
Lucinda_HackerLv4Lucinda_Hacker

R u going to finish or add to your other novels?

BStar
BStarLv3BStar

Thanks for the Chapter!

Jumure
JumureLv15Jumure

Scraping dried blood off of your eyes to see is super metal.