Comments of chapter undefined of Azimuth: The Elden Throne (New Version)

The past 5ish chapters have been full info dump, and I can’t bring myself to read it. Scimmed the entire thing. I don’t feel a connection with any of the introduced characters, so the lore of the city feels really misplaced imo. The pace of the story feels a bit off, but I can’t really put my finger on why, other than a bit of excessive monologue use in strange places. I do really like how you’ve posted pictures of the people and creatures in your comments, and I wish you luck with your story!