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Comments of chapter undefined of The supreme mage from the land of the Little People

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The concept of traveling through different worlds to seek external support is an interesting one, but the sudden appearance of stitched body parts and the crude language used in the dialogue detracts from the overall quality of the story. It would be better if the author could refine the plot and the characters' dialogue to make it more enjoyable to read

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GOOD JOB

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