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Comments of chapter undefined of GAME DEVELOPER SYSTEM

saylar5
saylar5Lv10saylar5

i am really disappoented

Will_Petty_0928
Will_Petty_0928Lv13Will_Petty_0928

you almost had a good story almost made me think there was hope for this genre when they find out you want to charge for a book with copyright material this whole thing will be gone and I ain't going down with the ship bye

agaxent_1465
agaxent_1465Lv4agaxent_1465

You think your novel worth to pay? Just 38 chapter and boom pay to read. . Your arrogance is ur downfall. . . Before you made mistake like this you make sure one of your novel was ever completed, , but hey you got a record of novel dropper hehe too bad

GM0006
GM0006Lv1GM0006

I eagerly read each chapter, handed in my power stones every day without fail... so that in the end the chapters were locked? It just can't be. Reading this was a waste of time if it was going to end like this. The author could have left an advance notice so that those of us who read from the web did not have to waste time reading something that we could never finish. It was good while it lasted. Thanks for everything... although I won't be able to read the end of this.

Alex_Van_zyl
Alex_Van_zylLv4Alex_Van_zyl

Not enough patrons? I take it you'll lock GAME MAKER too? Honestly, I was having fun, eagerly waiting for each chapter, but now you're saying I have to pay? Nah, I'll just stick to authors that write for their/our enjoyment and aren't running after profit.

Porodoks
PorodoksLv2Porodoks

Wasn't it so, we give you power stones and keep this book in the top as high as we can. In return, are you giving us chapters? I feel that the rating will drop sharply. Goodbye guys.

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Korden
KordenLv12Korden

secondly, the main character is a bit of a fool, he can buy an E rank seed, and make D rank mobs there, hone his Combat strategies there. he has the knowledge of many enemies, with many abilities, in place of this, he takes and drags out of the city, reveals his abilities without honing them + I want to read more about the development of the player, about his experience in creating the game and not bang and 18 days have passed, bang and a month has passed for which they made a resident evil, bang and I went on a mission, but the retelling of games, that's just 90% which honestly disappoints. third, why did he sell the rights and shoot something on them, if the hero himself said that Illusion is worth nothing he could make a film himself, in the right length, with the right effects, and then sell it for a full price!

Lee_Everett_8973
Lee_Everett_8973Lv1Lee_Everett_8973

Honestly, screw you. You already use patreon to keep chapters locked, but now the fact your locking Webnovel also is extremely scummy.

Matt_Dead
Matt_DeadLv1Matt_Dead

I'm sad

Dragonox_Novelist
Dragonox_NovelistLv3Dragonox_Novelist

Tf? I was enjoying this story but now I have to pay to read? Sorry, but no way am I gonna do that. It's not worth the effort and I thought you were better than this

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Ehbon
EhbonLv5Ehbon

Magneto’s mutant power is not JUST the ability to control metals, he’s called the master of magnetism for a reason—it’s in his name! His powers are so strong the extend to electromagnetism in its entirety, meaning that he can throw bolts of lightning.

Etema
EtemaLv10Etema

drop for pay novel, bye bye

Andressalazar128
Andressalazar128Lv4Andressalazar128

wait a minute now i have to download the app to read what a bad decision

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MERLIN_DREEMUR
MERLIN_DREEMURLv1MERLIN_DREEMUR

Thanks for the chapter

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PlutoXIII
PlutoXIIILv4PlutoXIII

Dark souls, for next has: Swordsman training Spell, pyro, healing, dark magic training Archery Martial arts from punching Crafting All I could think of.

BlazeXII
BlazeXIILv13BlazeXII

He locked the chapters, who wants to guess he got hooked into the Webnovel slave contract?

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NIon
NIonLv3NIon

?? but the power of magneto is the power to control magnetic fields not metal

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Korden
KordenLv12Korden

I don't understand the difference between a developer and a player let's say why a player having 2-3-4-5 mana units, does not create a game, say darts, and put D player in there, the player who developed the game gets mana -> develop mana pool -> goes to E rank or at least 100 mana and voila you have a new developer!

Snovmanthegamer
SnovmanthegamerLv3Snovmanthegamer

YOU ARE AN IDIOT. Show consistency first, then think about money!

Porodoks
PorodoksLv2Porodoks

Who knows similar books with seeds to create something?

Rp_Rprrr
Rp_RprrrLv1Rp_Rprrr

I am Russian-speaking, and read through a translator. and the fact that there is no translation into Russian in the application puts an end to this book for me. I hope to come back here someday đŸ«Ą