NunuXD
you really should include a branching narrative when heisnberg and Ethan get to talk to take mother Miranda down together as the only reason the negotiation failed the first time was cause Ethan was an emotional mess and heisnberg has a negotiation skills of a dead fish. other players in this novel act differently than Ethan and so do the npcs.
Debo decir que me encantan tus historias y la velocidad tan buena de actualizaciĂłn, pero sin duda lo que mĂĄs me gusta es que tĂș no le pones candados đ a tus historias. Otros escritores de la plataforma suelen bloquear desde el capĂtulo 50 o 60 pero tĂș escribes libremente y tus historias que llegan al 100 siguen siendo libres de bloqueos