Indeed, at least they should be a growth type or that they unlock special features in conjunction with specific titles for maximum or intended affect, as one needed a specific title as a requirement to prove oneself worthy or too resonate with certain concepts/ lores
Could you please separate the comments you add at the end from the fiction? (so like at the bottom with dashes, points or something?
Since it can be annoying to keep them and the actual fiction apart?
Otherwise it is a very good fiction so far, keep it up!