Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)

this story isen't really that good because it doesn't have many imotional moments but you force it anyways like that naruto moment where he was about fight sasuke. You made naruto sound like a dumass with that cringe words it was like you skip 100 chapters of emotional bonding. this wood have been good if you have more chapters with naruto and oc bonding like student amd teacher and also you shood not copy to much DBZ because it feals weard in narutovers like that speach. Also you shood name the fighting style because it sounds wrong here. Plz continu the other story.