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amy_la
amy_laLv14amy_la

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Marianne33
Marianne33Lv14Marianne33

Daisy is heartbroken ๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿฅบ yet it is so interesting to see her act the way she does, even though she is aware of the traditional roles of her time she feels brave enough to fight him and call him names especially knowing his strength and what he could actually do even if he wasn't a vampire, as her husband he could easily put her in place. There is still a level of trust she feels to be able to do that. Some Knowledge of the fact that he does care. It is in her subconscious. She of all wouldn't miss it, with all her great instincts. Now curious for how Rhain will answer. He is going through a turmoil as well and discovering it slowly.

Sacoguns
SacogunsLv15Sacoguns

๐™„ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™  ๐™๐™š ๐™™๐™ค๐™š๐™จ ๐™˜๐™–๐™ง๐™š, ๐˜ฟ๐™–๐™ž๐™จ๐™ฎ. ๐™„๐™› ๐™๐™š ๐™™๐™ž๐™™๐™ฃ'๐™ฉ ๐™ฎ๐™ค๐™ช ๐™ฅ๐™ง๐™ค๐™—๐™–๐™—๐™ก๐™ฎ ๐™ฌ๐™ค๐™ช๐™ก๐™™ ๐™—๐™š...๐™ฅ๐™ช๐™จ๐™๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™ช๐™ฅ ๐˜ฟ๐™–๐™ž๐™จ๐™ž๐™š๐™จ!!! ๐Ÿ˜… ๐™’๐™๐™š๐™ฃ ๐™„ ๐™ฌ๐™–๐™จ ๐™–๐™—๐™ค๐™ช๐™ฉ 10 ๐™ฎ๐™š๐™–๐™ง๐™จ ๐™ค๐™ก๐™™, ๐™„ ๐™ฌ๐™–๐™จ ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™›๐™–๐™ฉ๐™ช๐™–๐™ฉ๐™š๐™™ ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ฉ๐™ ๐™ซ๐™–๐™ข๐™ฅ๐™ž๐™ง๐™š๐™จ...๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐˜ฝ๐™š๐™ก๐™– ๐™‡๐™ช๐™œ๐™ค๐™จ๐™ž ๐™ ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™™. ๐™„ ๐™˜๐™๐™–๐™ฃ๐™œ๐™š๐™™ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™ฌ๐™ค๐™ง๐™™๐™จ ๐™ค๐™› ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™˜๐™๐™ค๐™ง๐™ช๐™จ ๐™ค๐™› ๐˜ฟ๐™–๐™ž๐™จ๐™ฎ ๐˜ฝ๐™š๐™ก๐™ก (๐™– ๐™จ๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™ฌ๐™ง๐™ž๐™ฉ๐™ฉ๐™š๐™ฃ ๐™ž๐™ฃ 1892 ๐™—๐™ฎ ๐™ƒ๐™–๐™ง๐™ง๐™ฎ ๐˜ฟ๐™–๐™˜๐™ง๐™š) ๐™ฉ๐™ค - ๐˜ฟ๐™–๐™ž๐™จ๐™ฎ, ๐˜ฟ๐™–๐™ž๐™จ๐™ฎ, ๐™œ๐™ž๐™ซ๐™š ๐™ข๐™š ๐™ฎ๐™ค๐™ช๐™ง ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™จ๐™ฌ๐™š๐™ง ๐™™๐™ค, ๐™„'๐™ข ๐™๐™–๐™ก๐™› ๐™˜๐™ง๐™–๐™ฏ๐™ฎ, ๐™–๐™ก๐™ก ๐™›๐™ค๐™ง ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™—๐™ก๐™ค๐™ค๐™™ ๐™ค๐™› ๐™ฎ๐™ค๐™ช...๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ง๐™š'๐™จ ๐™ข๐™ค๐™ง๐™š, ๐™—๐™ช๐™ฉ ๐™„ ๐™˜๐™–๐™ฃ'๐™ฉ ๐™ง๐™š๐™ข๐™š๐™ข๐™—๐™š๐™ง ๐™–๐™ก๐™ก ๐™ค๐™› ๐™ž๐™ฉ. ๐™ƒ๐™ค๐™ฌ๐™š๐™ซ๐™š๐™ง, ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™จ๐™š ๐™ก๐™–๐™จ๐™ฉ ๐™ฉ๐™ฌ๐™ค ๐™˜๐™๐™–๐™ฅ๐™ฉ๐™š๐™ง๐™จ ๐™ข๐™–๐™™๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™๐™–๐™ฉ ๐™จ๐™ž๐™ก๐™ก๐™ฎ ๐™˜๐™๐™ž๐™ก๐™™๐™๐™ค๐™ค๐™™ ๐™ข๐™š๐™ข๐™ค๐™ง๐™ฎ ๐™›๐™ง๐™ค๐™ข ๐™ฃ๐™š๐™–๐™ง๐™ก๐™ฎ 60 ๐™ฎ๐™š๐™–๐™ง๐™จ ๐™–๐™œ๐™ค ๐™ฅ๐™ค๐™ฅ ๐™ช๐™ฅ, ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™ฃ๐™ค๐™ฌ ๐™จ๐™ฉ๐™ช๐™˜๐™  ๐™ž๐™ฃ ๐™ข๐™ฎ ๐™๐™š๐™–๐™™!! ๐Ÿคทโ€โ™€๏ธ ๐™„ ๐™™๐™ค๐™ฃ'๐™ฉ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™  ๐™ฎ๐™ค๐™ช ๐™จ๐™๐™ค๐™ช๐™ก๐™™ ๐™˜๐™ค๐™ข๐™ฅ๐™š๐™ก ๐™๐™š๐™ง, ๐™๐™๐™–๐™ž๐™ฃ. ๐™’๐™๐™–๐™ฉ ๐™ฌ๐™ค๐™ช๐™ก๐™™ ๐™—๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™จ๐™š๐™ฃ๐™จ๐™š? ๐™’๐™ค๐™ช๐™ก๐™™ ๐™ž๐™ฉ ๐™Ÿ๐™ช๐™จ๐™ฉ ๐™—๐™š ๐™›๐™ค๐™ง ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™š๐™ง๐™ง๐™ค๐™ง ๐™ซ๐™–๐™ก๐™ช๐™š? ๐˜ผ๐™จ ๐™ฎ๐™ค๐™ช ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ค๐™ช๐™œ๐™๐™ฉ, ๐™จ๐™๐™š ๐™ ๐™ฃ๐™ค๐™ฌ๐™จ ๐™ฃ๐™ค๐™ฌ. ๐˜ฟ๐™š๐™–๐™ก ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ฉ๐™ ๐™ž๐™ฉ! ๐Ÿ˜ก

K_Deck
K_DeckModeratorK_Deck

I hope he answers the question honestlyโ€ฆ. He withheld major info from herโ€ฆ he lied to herโ€ฆ she feels betrayed. But can he fix this? If he wants to, I think yesโ€ฆ

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ice_princess42000
ice_princess42000Lv14ice_princess42000

These chapters just keep getting better and better, lady! I laughed at Daisyโ€™s commentary, I melted along with Rhain, I gasped in time with his biteโ€ฆ All the feels - right here.

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onelookaway
onelookawayLv14onelookaway

I think the fact that he took pleasure in terrifying her, and then snapped at her saying he doesnโ€™t care is what hurt Daisy the most.๐Ÿ˜” Poor thing. And it seems she was just starting to really care for him herself.๐Ÿ’” Jasmine, this wonderfully written chapter had me feeling all kinds of emotions! I canโ€™t wait for the next one to come!! Great job my dear, great job!!๐Ÿ’•โ™ฅ๏ธ PS. I LOVE the long chapters too!! Thank you!!!!๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿซถ๐Ÿผ

shadowknight57
shadowknight57Lv14shadowknight57

A heartbreaking chapter, poor Daisy. Seriously though dude, how do you expect her not to be upset at the utter betrayal of trust? It's not that she finds you disgusting because you're a vampire, she finds you disgusting because you relish her terror.

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

I'm sad and heartbroken for Daisy๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”She was opening to Rhain already and then this๐Ÿฅบ Although I liked the chase I didn't think it'll hurt this way. She was right, he could have just done it outright, but why did Rhain have to terro rize her to the point of hating him.I'm heartbroken for Rhain too he cares for Daisy- lots. I hope she sees and feel that too.๐Ÿฅบ

Dusti_Martin
Dusti_MartinLv14Dusti_Martin

Can't say I'd react any different, Daisy. Although I might have used that pin sooner.

Adrijana26
Adrijana26Lv15Adrijana26

Great chapter! A bit of every emotion and now the question in the end. O rahin all the questions will be coming up I hope you answer correctly .

Amanda_Jimerson
Amanda_JimersonLv14Amanda_Jimerson

What an amazing, emotional chapter. Such a pivotal point in their relationship.

Mara_Heller
Mara_HellerLv15Mara_Heller

oh man Daisy is heartbroken i feel so bad for her...

Kendall_Michalak
Kendall_MichalakLv15Kendall_Michalak

My heart is broken ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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Chandra_Ranell
Chandra_RanellLv14Chandra_Ranell

That chapter was perfection!

Jesk8
Jesk8Lv15Jesk8

That last line! Rhain is going to feel something unexpected.

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

Although Rhain is wickedly cunning, he has some residuals of humanity within him. He now has his job cut out for him in terms of regaing Daisyโ€™s trust.

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

Rhain should not compel Daisy to forget anything. He must tell her absolutely everything about how his brother and him became vampires. He also must confess to Daisy that he cannot father children. Now Daisy may suddenly become fearful about her mother spending time with Tiberius.

Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

DespinaNY
DespinaNYLv15DespinaNY

kt_cali
kt_caliLv14kt_cali

Wow, this chapter was epic. Lots of emotions and lingering anticipation of what is to come. I understand Daisys reaction, such betrayal ๐Ÿ˜”. I know she will worry about her mother. It will be interesting to see how this unfolds.

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LowVSdiamond
LowVSdiamondLv14LowVSdiamond

This was a long emotional chapter! Rhayn better be sincere in his answer. She deserves the truth and to keep her memories. She has taken things pretty good in my opinion! She is willing to hear his justification, to discuss and understand. She isn't just shutting him out or just shocked. She is trying to understand because she cares a lot and he has just terrifyingly turned her world and potentially the rest of her young life upside down by FEDDING OUT OF HER. She is entitled to freaking out Rhayn, and you have to let her do so if you want any future with her.Thanks for the beautiful chapter Jasmine!