Comments of chapter undefined of Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
HideousGrain
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be nice to see more territory development especially army wise as 2k Vrs 60k seems a bit one sided. I get the Awakened and tactics make a big difference to shorten it. but for a settlement of over 200k the ratio of citizens to army is abysmal! As well as off load some of the soul traits for more unique materials and stuff to give him an edge. With over 400 soul traits, it's a bit waste for them to be sitting around.
Definitely need a powerful star rating generals if we can. Such as investing into another immortal knight type summon. One that comes with a special building or can help improve a build such as a Legendary Eleven Archer General that improves the archer building into a special building. That way we can keep improving on the mass summoning of star less or 1 star summons like you do with holy knights! That help allot and make him even closer with the Eleven race! Do take time for mental health! 1 long chapter every day for couple weeks. Won’t bother us. Jsut keep us chomping at the bits for more!
Author I hope you are not going to turn the MC into a slave. If you do you will likely lose readers. If the MC is forced in one way or another to take on a geas from the Nest that will be making the MC a slave and thus their Dog. No mater how you try to spin it the MC will still be their Dog. Even if you turn around and end up making the MC take over the Nest organization from the inside or make him their leader he will still be their Dog and readers will end up dropping the LN. It is enough that you had the MC learn a bit and he knows that something exists that has control over his parents and his sister. Even if the MC hates them right now that could be fixed with him slowly learning why they didn't have contact with him and his brother to keep them out of the grasp of the Nest (if that is the real reason). Then the MC can stay OUT of the nest and kill them off when he has more power. At the very least the MC can HIDE in the expanse and never come back to the normal world and just work through his contracted ex-lords and grow stronger and greater inside before coming out to kill off the Nest. Having the MC take on the Geas of the nest whether forced or not and having the MC take it over from the inside will be nothing but cliche.... Please don't make the MC a slave.
Always take care of your mental health and take breaks as needed , I would personally suggest having chapters written ahead so if you need even a week off, you can take that time and still consistently release. Most readers are addicted(as am I) to great novels and this is definitely one of my favorites. I have lost interest in books , due to poor release rates and lack of development on the story. This is why I would suggest , consistent shorter chapters and keeping a reserve of content for those breaks you need. Very happy with this novel and it’s rate of development , so many different directions you can go, the nest can capture him, he can inadvertently take over the human alliance if they try to force him into there control , potential love interest with Alice . Seems like he could leave his friends behind at his current power increase rate. Danny can come back OP or crippled and stuck as his subordinate . He could betray humans as a whole. Personally I would like to see him explore farther into the jungle territory . Love your content , keep up the great work!
I think Michael needs opportunities to equip him to face the nest. Since he is my hero, I would like him to procure a legendary or supreme artifact that helps him deal with the cursed seals, he needs a strong army and a medium level summoning gate to upgrade to a higher lord. He seriously needs an army to fight on all fronts. How about he befriends the deer and the mythical beast the rules the air above his territory. How could his taming soul trait help in taming animal warriors. I am concerned about the nest and its mythical creatures and the neas, so troublesome .
sorry from his mother ( after that slave mark or something is removed ) that sorry is something that can see have a great impact on him ( even though you author like to give him a hard time i hope he can have few moments of true happiness 🍀 ) except that Alice and Michael's mother should have a talk if possible alice is so her videos of Michael when he came out origin expense after using Chaos pills and after danny's death ( Michael's mother should understand the suffering has gone through so that heart breaks into pieces that's the best punishment she can get and after that both of them should be United ) just my opinion through the story is going fantastic
I think the numbers get confusing regarding scrolls, fragments etc, instead of mentioning them every time focusing on the story can be great. The relationship between Michael and his family is delicate(as Michael grew up with only his brother, his feelings and sadness)so it needs to be tread carefully and little by little if possible so the story feels natural(Everything that he achieved till now is with his own effort so he needs to move on from his family -this is just my personal opinion ).
has Mr Author asked. I find something not logic with the relationship/story of the MC and his parents. Maybe later it will make sense, but for now, the leaving one for the sake of the other or similar needs a really good reason. As a parent, I would not leave one behind or one of the parents would stay behind as well. My other question, the MC is slow on the take of his skills financial's advantage, before it made sense, he did not want to stand out, but now?
