HideousGrain
I'm not happy with this chapter. Too many repeated names and too much unnecessary padding. It seemed to me more like a jumble of too many ideas mixed together than something organized and clear. Not to mention the ending...
don't mind them, the majority of people would rather know about the techniques he's using how he made them and their requirements so we can justify his future actions. it's not like this chapter is interrupting a fight scene or something so I don't know why this person is complaining. its information necessary for true immersion. the same person would be complaining later if the chapter wasn't about his techniques asking why mc is using so much recourses to advance his techniques etc etc
HideousGrain:True. that's why I added the disclaimer in the last chapter. I could have gone on and beyond to write 6 chapters about the techniques, but I didn't want to do that. Thus, this result xd