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Comments of chapter undefined of Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

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Denis_Veremiy
Denis_VeremiyLv15Denis_Veremiy

I think a focus on artifacts that are “kingdom” helping for example the summoner gate if you could add more artifacts that do things for the whole territory or some kind of buffs something along those lines. Also love the plot so far.

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Mewbacca
MewbaccaLv15Mewbacca

I think the novel is extremely well structured and has a solid plot that isn't filled with holes or 'plot armor'. I think we could use a little more detail in the output of his territory such as armor and potions made, food produced/consumed, enlightenment, ect every once in a while to highlight the growth of the citizens and territory. I think adding too much of anything would throw off the good balance you have of story progression vs world/character building.

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Nero_51
Nero_51Lv15Nero_51

I know it's more efficient to just grow and interact with the summons but I would like more interactions with other Humans outside the origin expanse at least some more conversations to build up the friendships that he has

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Forlorn_Soldier
Forlorn_SoldierLv15Forlorn_Soldier

Thanks for the chapter, and congratulations on reaching chapter 300!

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boneramen
boneramenLv15boneramen

i think in the gaps vetween the intense combat arc, more focus on the kingdom building aspects are nice . though overall this book is written well and by habit i check my phone around the times releases come out.

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ChaosZ
ChaosZLv15ChaosZ

I like the structure of the story the way it is tbh

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derreksm
derreksmLv15derreksm

a love interest. all work and no play makes michael a dull boy.

brandon_collins
brandon_collinsLv13brandon_collins

I would like to see more interaction between different assets he has accumulated in the past and how they are coming into fruition. Like creative ways he uses his bilrox. The benifits his 4 star tree spirit brings etc and maybe seeing independent leaders among his summons begin to pop up and becoming named/more incorporated when discussing his territory. Like a dedicated knight that has exceptional skill and determination outshining his peers and becomes manager of the army and his presence boosts the efficiency of the troops training and rates of starless signing up. Causing a more visible growth in it's prowess. Then implementing similar leadership positions in the other casts and seeing new innovations that don't come directly from MC

DaoistT3Lqby
DaoistT3LqbyLv15DaoistT3Lqby

I honestly love how the story is progressing and structured but a small detail has bothered me. The MC has slowly gained more familiarity and trust with a couple characters but why not Alice. She has showed him nothing but sincerity but he still doesn't confide in her and keeps her at a distance. For someone that has supported him almost before everyone else I find that weird.

Dillon_Zemtseff
Dillon_ZemtseffLv15Dillon_Zemtseff

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trenthany
trenthanyLv15trenthany

Only thing Ie is the sudden changes for chapters at a time. A brief flashback is one thing but as much as I like Danny for michaels sake I didn’t need his story in that much detail I didn’t hate it either just jarring so I speed tan those and got back to Michael if the story had featured Danny heavily all through it as two parrallel tales it wouldn’t be bad but after so much on Michael the switch bothered me. Felt like a separate book.

wno09
wno09Lv4wno09

Potentially missing things. 1. Love interest(s) aka harem building. 2. Stupid but powerful pet(s). 3. The brick. Y’all know what I’m talking about yeah?

Amestrean
AmestreanLv15Amestrean

I realise he's in an area where most of the lords and adventurers are non-humans, and thus not especially friendly, but with the sheer numbers of people in the world, you would expect more contact with people other than summons. Like a few adventurers who could settle in his territory, without necessarily have to pledge their loyalty like the elves.. Like just a base camp for them to work in the forest. His territory is new and not yet attractive for this kind of thing to happen yet, but it could be something to strive for: to be attractive for adventurers activity.

Nero_51
Nero_51Lv15Nero_51

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