HideousGrain
Yeah I think this is where I drop the book. There is just nothing I really like about the main character and his interactions with others. It’s painful to read. Why does he have to act so circumspect with his own brother. Just say here is the facts 1) approached by lady, 2) offered a testing spot and help. What do you think? I bet he will probably hide everything about his territory and ability from his brother too. Instead of two minds working together he is stuck as a simpleton. Then add on all the times he is dazed, shocked, or confused and just spaces out. It’s just annoying. Sorry. Everything else seems to be a good start but I am not patient enough for the author to learn how to write realistic interactions. As a side note, I also don’t want to read another cliche school arc.