No re-write or fixing of grammar needed. Bro only thing I hope u won't quit this work because it's too good. And one chapter on regular basis is enough
Bro, the only thing I hope is that you won't quit, this fanfic is just amazing, the character interaction feels real(it is missing from 90% of all works),you are a good writer, and I hope you get only good things in your life.
no rewrite or fixing of grammar needed at all,neither on chaps you wrote yourself or used google translator on. There is no major hiccup or to much mistakes to break reading flow. So just continue your good work and don´t worry about it.
Brother, don't worry, we all had a moment in life when we also needed to think that we did something and you are achieving it. Your story is good and I think the grammar is good.
yeah , if u find it hard to keep it going , just do a cross over with more vampire fics or games xD no need to strictly keep the cannon :;D , anyways good chapter !