ForeverPupa
Pupa, are you still planning on keeping this book at 500-600 chapters? About Kate, can you not let her get beaten? Can you keep the conflict somewhat clean? Cold war instead of hot? I really don't want to read a scene where she ends up getting locked in a room and battered the way Chloe did. As for Erin, it's best if she's simply too crazy to function and kills herself. Sarah needs to die or at least end up in jail and lose her reputation. Marlon and Penny should both die. Don't care what happens to Mary and Matt. Graham needs to gain some clarity.I hope Dahlia talks some sense into him.