Comments of chapter undefined of My Three Obsessive Magnate Husbands Are Infatuated With My Beauty

Oh hey… take it day by day and dont give up because this story has good potential. It’s because it is different and has potential I am trying to dhare feedback for when you perfect it. It is really hard to create whilst dealing with every day concerns. I appreciate your efforts so dont be discouraged. Fight on! So, from your responses, I come to see you are building up to some drama. Im looking forward to this. Also, I see you are putting forth the story and revise for perfection later? Understood :) I will read til the end now and give feedback after it’s all done.

I’m hoping to be helpful. I’m finding the transitions between chapters abrupt and somewhat confusing. The motivation of the mc swiftly went from she got married unwillingly, mostly finds elder bro hot but also 2nd bro but he disgusts her with perviness but now she’s affectionate? But the description seems good. What I’m not understanding clearly are why the various chars are feeling or choosing to do what they are foing.

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