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Comments of chapter undefined of Lowly Ascent

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Otis_Atis
Otis_AtisLv14Otis_Atis

It's decent so far, but him losing memories nullifies the character dev from previous chaps. If he could gain them and learn a thing or two-mature, the story would be interesting. for now, it's plain

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Alien_X
Alien_XLv4Alien_X

i wonder what his reaction will be when he find out his past. or maybe you know he was and is just acting till now like he doesn't know what's happening. let's see what the future beholds

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Zerus
ZerusLv15Zerus

Thanks for the chapter

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Juan_Cardenas_8016
Juan_Cardenas_8016Lv14Juan_Cardenas_8016

The fighting is been good, but a bit plain, try to add more layers to it, as well as a bit more strategy. I feel like fights in a novel should have a balance, sometimes using brute force or power, and sometimes using plots, traps and unusual means to beat opponents. One more thing is that I hope cain eventually regains his memories and is able to face them, not being able to overcome his trauma makes him kind of weak as a main character in my opinion. Good job so far, keep it up.

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Sweatysausage
SweatysausageLv4Sweatysausage

Its been great so farđŸ’Ș