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The fighting is been good, but a bit plain, try to add more layers to it, as well as a bit more strategy. I feel like fights in a novel should have a balance, sometimes using brute force or power, and sometimes using plots, traps and unusual means to beat opponents. One more thing is that I hope cain eventually regains his memories and is able to face them, not being able to overcome his trauma makes him kind of weak as a main character in my opinion. Good job so far, keep it up.