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Harry Potter: The Boy Who Eats[COMPLETE]

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DaoistRisingRaisin
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starting to dislike the turn. just being honest. if it goes to far I won't keep reading.

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8ightbit
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yeah, this is too much.. not to mention, I'm here for the pure slice of life.. probs the majority of your readers too.. MC being drained and becoming a resource for his blood was not in the description or tags.. maybe put a fatal curse in his blood like how unicorn blood is.. instead of giving luck, make it act like a fatal dose malaclaw venom..

MisterImmortal:I understand you man. This story is supposed tobbe light hearted. MC changing things for the better. But you see, if there is no problem to solve or enemy to defeat, there will never be moments of triumph. 100% pure slice of life is great, but people lose interest from it too quickly if there is no tension or enemy to pool forward to.
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EchoFrost
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Happy should make Griphook suffer, or his Happy's luck will make him suffer. Malfoy sr too

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Just_it
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kill them all and thats it,next

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TrueFamine
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Nah fk that we dont let snap slide after her cut him over and over cut the hand that was holding the knife clean off

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Zianna
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that was utterly bad*ss! we all like to think Happy just a naive kid but he was mature enough to know that going all woe is me victim mode would get him nowhere. so? what did he do?! he literally TALKED his way into a possible ally while escaping torture and he did while being 90% or more truthful!!! ABSOLUTELY EPIC!

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Alvin_Alvarez
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He can always convince Snape by telling him Dumbledore is just raising Harry to get slaughter.

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JonRedSea
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Thanks for the Chapter

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mertlafy
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Iceling
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*so confused on what's going on*

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Loki_777
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Thanks for the chapter

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Young_fruit_Smiley
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thanks for the chapter ☺️ .

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Kacper_Cwajda
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Thanks for the chapter

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DaoistTYnRyL
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thanks for the chap

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INDRA32
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Thanks for the chapter

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EvilPenguin_666
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Gargamel72
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What a twist... interesting

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Fanfic_Fanatic
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Yoooo!!!!This Story is getting Interestin!!!

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Ballad
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This is dumb

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MoogleKing
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What a depressing plot. With his blood being hunted down constantly, it completely ruins any lighthearted moments. I'll keep reading though and hope that this gets resolved quickly so I can go back to enjoying the story.

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Natanael486
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Thanks for the chapter

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