Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: The Boy Who Eats[COMPLETE]

I'm saying this again MisterImmortal, don't make him suffer more

We all know nothing is gonna happen, happy is lucky, that's his deal. Malfoy's plans are gonna fail or backfire spectacularly.

Ehhh sorry but I’m out. The happy go lucky story is cool but when you try to throw in mystery and what not it kinda turns the story off. Either you keep with the theme or you have to diverge it completely. You’re gonna end up splitting your readers with the way this is going. Half are gonna want the happy go lucky guy to stay the other half is gonna want you to make him full on serious. Me personally the happy go lucky guy was a nice change of pace from other HP fanfiction and making this kinda “let’s go after his blood” nonsense is just ehh. One way or another you’re gonna have to change the theme to fit this actually very serious thing with his blood. He’s got Malfoy and more than likely the rest of the death eaters plus goblins coming after him and yet you still plan to make him this whole happy eating guy? Yeah idk how this’ll fly. I get the high risk high reward stuff but his blood just filled with this Felix potion is just freaking HIGH HIGH HIGH HIGH Risk for the Harry Potter universe. Bro is basically target number 1 to be tortured and what not. And going back to him just being this happy eating guy is gonna make this story unreadable when he’s got the entirety of death eaters after him. God could you even imagine when Voldemort shows himself and finds out about Happy’s blood? He’d kill everyone just to get his blood and I don’t think this story has the right element and will bring it down. Sorry but I’m out.

the fact that the goblin got his blood is not lucky on his part which is contradicting the story! he's supposed to be lucky all the time so his luck should've prevented others from discovering his lucky blood. this is making no sense at all. so even if you have other plans, the fact is you let others find out his lucky blood is not lucky for his part anymore so it's a major plot hole and the only saving grace is him being a protagonist of your story. so I'm out sorry.

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