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Comments of chapter undefined of Rebirth in the Apocalypse: Third Time's a Charm

Rebirth in the Apocalypse: Third Time's a Charm

Devilbesideyou666

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Nivz24
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the FL is too full of herself, from chapter 1 til now..

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Mizkikki
MizkikkiLv15Mizkikki

he barely made it through that.....d*mn plot armor I thought I turned that off for him

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AliceElyse
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Elorinczy
ElorinczyLv15Elorinczy

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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Chriser_Kenny
Chriser_KennyLv15Chriser_Kenny

I am re-reading again and I found one of those grammar mistakes. I think you meant "immediately my mind went ", but you spelled went as when. Unless when has another meaning where you are living. I know American English is different than British English so I could be wrong.

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